Wednesday, July 4, 2012

What do you think?



Okay friends.. I need some critisizm here.. constructive of course :).. Is there anything that I need to tweek here?  I have been staring at this painting for far too long and feel frustrated!!  It could be a simple fix, or maybe its finally right.. Please!  Suggestions are wanted :)

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  1. She is so close, Jen - fabulous job!
    Bit more blue sparkle in both eyes, and especially in left eye of portrait, in upper outside area of iris, Also a bit more shadowing of eyeball there.
    Right side of portrait needs a bit more of a shadow along length of nose, almost from tip to eye level.
    If you can't see what I mean, DON'T touch it, because it's so darn good already!!!

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    1. Kathryn, thank you so much for your suggestions! I will touch those up.. What do you think of the mouth? I feel like its off somehow! lol..

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  2. OK, really, I had to look twice to tell which was the photo, absolutely lovely. You are so talented.

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    1. Thank you Maria! You are too sweet! :)

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